Wednesday, November 5, 2014

November Notes and College Chronicles Prequel!

I know most of my recent posts have just been updates, but I have a few more things to let you all know, lovely readers, before we move on to meatier posts. Thanks for having patience with me. :)

The day I bought fake tattoos and Augusta and I made ourselves into The Chosen Ones

First of all: don't forget to enter the giveaway for a paperback copy of Sixteen! Open to all countries; ends on Saturday, November 8.

Next up: so far, the Inkshares project for World of Shadows is not going well at all. It's disappointing, I'll admit, but I wasn't really sure what to expect, so it's not a huge deal. If I don't make it to my goal, I'll just go back to my original plan of self-publishing World of Shadows through the same process I used with Sixteen. Either way, it will be on virtual shelves before 2015 ends!

Third: Disclaimer: Yes, I am completely mental. But I decided on the day it started to go ahead and try NaNoWriMo again this year. For those of you unfamiliar with this month of insanity, check out the website. The book I'll be working on is another book in the Once Upon a Dream series (which World of Shadows kicks off). It's a loose Rapunzel retelling currently called My Mother's Shadow, though the title will probably change eventually.

I went to an awesome Halloween dance as Drusilla from Buffy the Vampire Slayer. This is the only photo of how I actually looked at the dance, because it was literally freezing all night and I clung to my thick winter cloak for dear life until my roommate and I arrived at the dance.
Then we have this: I've shared my plans for college studies and my future after graduation with you all before. Basically, the plan was (1) go to school, (2) become a teacher, (3) go teach in a missions capacity overseas. That plan has been changed. I'll probably go into more depth in a future post, but right now the main point is that I'm changing my major to English Literature. I hope to use this degree to go work overseas with missions and organizations and then write about it, be it for their website, newspapers, fundraising efforts, anything like that. So there will still be a service/missions focus, and I'll still be overseas, but with a writing rather than teaching focus, and probably with more traveling and visiting different groups rather than working for one long-term. In other words: more writing classes! Yay!

Finally: College Chronicles is going well! I have a handful of videos shot, and I'm editing them for posting. Video-blogging is definitely a new and strange frontier for me, but I'm sure I'll get the hang of it with practice. Today I'm sharing a prequel with you all, my lovely readers! This was shot at the Willy Wonka Halloween Dance last weekend.

Wednesday, April 2, 2014

I'm Not Dead

Hello, my lovely readers.

It's been a while, hasn't it?

I took an undecided, unannounced blogging break. I could explain about my real-world health problems, college crisis, schedule craziness, or high school senioritis. But I don't feel like making a laundry list of the issues driving me in circles this past month. Instead, I'll just say I fell off the blogging bandwagon and didn't really care about getting back on. I'm back now, so let's focus on the happy stuff.

Like my best friend's birthday on March 29. The best friend I based characters in my book Sixteen about. Speaking of Sixteen, something else very important occurred on March 29...



So, yeah, go buy it if you want. I'd love a review once you've read it, if you're feeling particularly generous.

Oh, and a bit of other news: since I've been finding it so hard to stick to blogging, I've decided to scale back the blogging schedule once again. This will probably only last until after graduation in late May, since I always feel like blogging more often in the summer. For now, though, I'll be popping in on Wednesdays and only on Wednesdays. I may or may not have a new series coming up next week... haven't decided yet. Just keep your eyes peeled ;) If I do go ahead with it, it's going to be huge. Life-changing. Trust me.

Thursday, March 20, 2014

So, Google Plus Comments...

You know those Google Plus comments? The Blogger comment feature intended to be more interactive? The setting I've been using for several months now?

I hate them.

First of all: for the many, many readers out there whose comments I have not responded to: I am so sorry! Apparently, Google+ Comments doesn't send me emails when I get new comments on my blog posts. In fact, I don't get any notice whatsoever.

Second: on several occasions, to make up for the whole no-email thing, I would drop by the blog myself to check for comments. Unfortunately, the comment box decided more times than not to just eat my comments and send them, invisible, into the black holes of cyberspace. Multiple times. Eventually I would just give up and leave my blog without commenting.

Third: I realize that there are quite a few readers here who don't have Google+ and, therefore, couldn't comment. Considering the second point above, even those of us who do have the right profiles struggle with the comments. I feel your pain.

Fourth: When I decided, a long while back, to get rid of Google+ comments... IT COULD NOT BE DONE. It was my third or fourth attempt (plus a lot of interwebs research and Googling) before I finally figured out how to turn the stupid things off and go back to regular comments. Apparently my having two separate Google accounts (an old one from middle school that I used to use for everything, and the new one I set up for professional/writing/blogging purposes) also makes anything that has to do with Google+ or YouTube that much harder. Arg. (I also really hate that Google+ and YouTube are practically combined, but that's a rant for another day.)

Fifth: To those of you who did manage to comment, and have those comments successfully posted, during my Google+ comments stint... I'm terribly sorry, but all those comments have been deleted. You can't transfer comments to or from the Google+ setting. Which is another reason I am frustrated it took me so long to figure out how to disable them. So many loyal readers, so many lovely comments -- all of them, gone!

Sigh.

Here's to a more peaceful and interactive commenting community in the future of this blog.

Thursday, March 13, 2014

Cover Reveal: Sixteen In Print!

SIXTEEN IS GOING TO PRINT GUYS.

Sorry for the screaming. But my FIRST BOOK TO EVER BE PUBLISHED IS GOING TO BE IN MY HANDS IN ACTUAL PAPER. With a proper - GORGEOUS - cover.

I love it. My writer's group loves it. My mom... doesn't love it. But eh, she's not the target audience. DID I MENTION I LOVE IT?!



And here's the full, with back and spine...


Lookie, lookie! I have a logo for my publishing house.


Tuesday, March 11, 2014

Why the Absent Parent(s)

Everyone who sticks around in the young adult book world has noticed this by now. Writers, readers, and bloggers everywhere have started questioning this practice, now dubbed a cliche. Yet nobody seems to know why it even happened, and few can come up with interesting and compelling ways to relieve this syndrome without damaging a good teen story. I speak of the Absent Parent(s) Syndrome -- and I think I've figured out why it's around.

First of all, look at what Absent Parent Syndrome is. The parents are dead, divorced, always working, in another state, etc. They overlook or misinterpret signs that anything is different in their teen's life. They play little to no part in the story. While the teens care deeply about their parents, as far as the book's concerned, parents are often the least important character.


Compare this to younger fiction. Kids' and middle grade books often place at least one parent in key roles. Even when the parent is only in one scene, something they say or do has great bearing on the rest of the story. They guide the characters, teach lessons, help mold the story. Cut parents from a young adult story, and you have an orphaned main character; cut the parents from a children's story, and you have a completely different (often weaker/hole-riddled) book.

Compare it to older fiction. Adults, while independent of their parents, are quite mindful of them. Perhaps they long to live up to their parents' reputation; perhaps they're fearful of letting parents down; perhaps they struggle to live their own lives while taking care of an ill parent. The parents may be present as a story character, or it could just be their memory -- whether as a great teacher and guide or as someone who left the character scarred -- but they always have a part, just as in children's books.

I think the reasoning behind this is in the real-life mindsets of children, teens, and adults. Children depend on their parents for everything, and see the world through the lenses their parents instill. They're blind to their parents' faults in many cases until later in life. The world revolves around the parents; they've not yet reached the age of thinking or providing for themselves. Adults are fully independent, usually with their own spouses and children eventually. They've balanced out after the hormones and insecurities of teenhood, and have found the right balance of freedom (thinking for themselves, being an individual) and family (considering others' opinions and preferences, making decisions for a group rather than just self).

Teens, on the other hand, stand on the ragged edges between the two. We must think for ourselves for the first time, and decide what beliefs from our childhood will continue with us in life. We must learn to provide for ourselves -- get a job, pay taxes, manage our money, make choices with the head rather than the hormones. All at the same time, we still live under the rules and decisions of our parents. In an attempt to learn to be the independent adults we know we must become to succeed in society, we tear away from our parents. Often this is where rebellion, anger, and misunderstandings stem from.

Many of us feel like the responsibilities of an adult are expected of us (getting a job and doing it well; paying for a car and its maintenance/gas), while the freedom of a child is all we receive in return (being told when to go to bed; having our eating habits monitored rather than letting us eat what we want, when we want). I realize that most parents almost always have the best intentions. While some of us try to keep in mind that living under someone else's roof and eating their food means following their rules, we often forget these things in our frustration. Not to mention hormones and the emotions they cause really are as confusing to us as they are to our parents. In the swirling mess that feels like our lives, we often tend to cut off others as much as possible to try and figure things out in our own topsy-turvy heads. No one feels this knife of separation as keenly as the parents who raised us.

Basically: Absent Parent Syndrome is cliche, yes. It's become a trite trope of YA fiction. But only when you dig to the heart of the matter can you as a writer find ways to begin fixing this problem.

Thursday, March 6, 2014

Book Tour: Lies

Excuse the extremely late hour of this post, please, because I've been in bed with a sinus infection and bronchitis for a week and a half now and completely forgot I was supposed to post this.

Lies by Oliver Dahl
Available March 11


About the Book

Ann Putnam Jr., one of the leading accusers during the Salem Witch Trials (1692) knows that something is wrong. After a horrifying encounter with Tituba, her friends were cursed. Miraculously untouched by the effects of the witch, Ann acts bewitched as well, in an attempt to accuse and hang her friends' torturers. This tragic experience of guilt, abuse, power, and love gives a first-person view into the spine-chilling months where neighbor turned on neighbor at the word of a little girl.



Excerpt from my interview with the author:

What inspired your book? How did it all start?
In my American History class last year, we were reading in our textbooks about pre-colonial America, the 1600’s or so. While reading, I was appalled to see that the Salem Witch Trials were mentioned once. The textbook summarized the events and moved on in one paragraph. I had always been kinda fascinated and horrified by the Salem Witch Trials, and to see them almost blown off in a class textbook was... shocking. We’re talking about an event that hugely inspired our modern judicial system--an event that speaks boldly about human nature, and the affect of extremist religion on people’s lives. So I decided to write a book. It’s a fictional novella, a firsthand account by Ann Putnam Jr., one of the leading accusers of the Salem Witch Trials. I would like to think it will shed much more light to people on that fascinating time than the brief paragraph in my history textbook.

What is your goal in writing and publishing this book?
Having published two books before, I want this one to be different. It’s not only about different things -- but in an entirely different genre as well! (My two previous books are modern YA/MG scifi/fantasy). But at the same time, there are similarities, like the possible existence of fantasy elements in real life, which I absolutely love. This book will be the best quality book that I have ever written, let alone released. The quality and professionalism will be like the best of traditionally published books, and will hopefully compete as well in the marketplace.

Read the rest of the interview.

Drop by the other tour stops and say hi!

Tuesday, March 4, 2014

Book Review: The Frost Chronicles

The Frost Chronicles by Kate Avery Ellison
In the icy, monster-plagued world of the Frost, one wrong move and a person could end up dead.



Book One: Frost
Book Two: Thorns
Book Three: Weavers
Book Four: Bluewing
Book Five: Aeralis

(Note: there are also two novellas, Brewer and Fugitive, that take place between books four and five. I am totally buying them, but since I haven't done so yet, they're not included in this review.)

Amazon Summary (Book One):
In the icy, monster-plagued world of the Frost, one wrong move and a person could end up dead—and Lia Weaver knows this better than anyone. After monsters kill her parents, she must keep the family farm running despite the freezing cold and threat of monster attacks or risk losing her siblings to reassignment by the village Elders. With dangers on all sides and failure just one wrong step away, she can’t afford to let her emotions lead her astray. So when her sister finds a fugitive bleeding to death in the forest—a young stranger named Gabe—Lia surprises herself and does the unthinkable. 
She saves his life. 
Giving shelter to the fugitive could get her in trouble. The Elders have always described the advanced society of people beyond the Frost, the “Farthers,” as ruthless and cruel. But Lia is startled to find that Gabe is empathetic and intelligent…and handsome. She might even be falling in love with him. 
But time is running out. The monsters from the forest circle the farm at night. The village leader is starting to ask questions. Farther soldiers are searching for Gabe. Lia must locate a secret organization called the Thorns to help Gabe escape to safety, but every move she makes puts her in more danger. 
Is compassion—and love—worth the risk?
My Thoughts:

I have finally found an author who measures up to the marvels of Cidney Swanson. Surprisingly - or perhaps not? - she, too, is an indie author. Other similarities between the two: their breathtaking book covers drew me in where the back cover copy left me skeptical. Both women focus more on series than standalone novels. Finally, both write in forms of the speculative genre, be that science fiction or dystopian.


Of course every book has flaws. The Frost books had a few typos, and the fourth book had a couple of minor inconsistencies with the rest of the series. (Example: a book referred to as The Winter Parables in the other books was called The Snow Parables in book four. Not a huge deal.) The author kept mixing up peak/peek and, more commonly, pour/pore. The first book got a bit sensuous, but that actually faded out for the most part. (Not the romance - definitely not! - but the toeing-the-line-between-okay-and-not.) There was one random curse word in one book, which I think just missed editing. (Today's cursing didn't really fit the story world.) Other than that, though, the writing was spotless. Glorious vocabulary, a perfect blend of showing and telling, a strongly designed story world, unique and individual characters...

Speaking of characters, they're basically the heart of these books, and most definitely the best part(s). Whether you like a person or not, you come to love the author's brilliant depth and voice for each unique person, no matter how small their role. Who can Lia trust? Why is he acting like that? What does she want? Everything comes down to motivation, just as it should, and the motivations here are not lacking.

There is a love triangle that develops a little less than halfway into the series... but oh, how beautifully it was written. I have never seen a triangle so masterfully done - for a Hunger Games and Matched fan like me, that's saying something. This series leaves those books in the dust. Both boys are equally matched to the girl and both would be great choices, emotionally and logically. Both of them have lives outside the girl. No matter what, the triangle is neither pushed too far aside as to become pointless, nor honed in on to the point where it becomes irritating. Lia keeps her head through everything. In fact, she's probably the strongest, most sensible heroine I've met.

Actually, Lia's strength of mind annoys me sometimes. It was worst in book four, if I remember correctly. In her attempt to protect those she loves and stay true to her loyalties, she doubts anyone who has ever not been on her side. At least four times she had absolutely no faith towards characters that were clearly (to me, anyway) not as evil as she made them out to be. As Gabe eventually points out, "Is there anyone you do trust, Lia?" (That might not be the exact quote.) At least the other characters were both as aware of and annoyed by this major trust issue as I was.

I wish I could tell you about everyone in this book. Ann, the soft and sweet best friend. Gabe, the mysterious fugitive. Adam, the unreadable loner. Jonn, the crippled but capable twin. Ivy, the irritating younger sister who grows oh-so-much. Borde, the strange scientist. Korr and Gordon and Raine and the Mayor and Claire and Cat and Stone and Everiss...

Some character-driven stories are a bit lacking in the plot department, but nobody will ever be able to accuse the Frost Chronicles of this. The twists! The turns! The development! While I sort-of agree with another Amazon reviewer - the fifth book felt like it lacked something in plot - the majority of the storyline was just stunning. I laughed, I cried, and I never knew what was coming. Seriously. As a writer, I've gotten used to finding every book I read a bit predictable. I've learned to distinguish what's coming up before the average reader. We talk about that in my writers' group a lot. But even though there was enough foreshadowing and hints laid out beforehand, I got my predictions shockingly wrong. Every. Single. Time. This person's the bad guy! That place is where they'll end up! He's going to die! She's going to turn out to be this big secret thing!

I'm surprised I never got annoyed with the *BUZZZ you're wrong!* moments. I guess I was too enthralled with what actually ended up happening to care that I had no idea where it was going. Each book in the series gives enough answers for you to feel like the book ended, but leaves enough questions to pull you right along to the next book. If I had an issue with any of the books' setup, it would have to be the openings. They never picked up exactly where the last book left off, and they felt a bit abrupt. It was hard to get into the first couple of books. It got easier with each book. The last book had a prologue, which none of the others did. I liked it, but it didn't seem to quite fit the flow of the series - I'd prefer if it were just chapter one.

The last book was also the only one with an epilogue, but that fit perfectly. Without that epilogue, the entire series would be left incomplete. After such a long ride with these characters, it was nice to ease out of the story world. All loose ends are tied together. The epilogue's almost entirely telling, but it works. It's like the older Grimm or Anderson fairy tale style, back before showing was a thing, or like when someone tells you a story orally. Even though it broke all the writing rules, the epilogue was probably one of the best part of the series.

The Frost Chronicles, my lovely readers, are a glorious example of escape reading with morals. I may or may not be experiencing book hangover... and my expectations for modern teen literature have certainly been raised impossibly higher. Traditional publishing's got nothing on Kate Avery Ellison.

I won a free copy of the first ebook of this series through LibraryThing. Upon my request, the author supplied the other four ebooks for free in exchange for a single series-wide review. All opinions expressed are entirely my own.

Thursday, February 27, 2014

Guest Post: Finding Inspiration

by Sarah Brooks

At various times in our lives, and for an assortment of reasons, we seek inspiration to help us move forward. Sometimes external forces provide us with the spark we are looking for, but more often than not, inspiration comes from somewhere inside us.

Whether you are stuck in a rut, looking for ways to elevate yourself, or simply striding forward through life; inspiration is at the center of your ability to succeed.  Beauty, charity, selflessness, natural sensory experiences, and a host of other external influences inspire us to feel and do things we might never touch-on otherwise.  But inspiration from within is highly personal; custom fitted to our individual wants and needs.

Finding your true inspiration starts with inward reflection; tapping passion, faith, strengths and even weaknesses.


Inner Passion Inspires

Whatever motivates you without requiring you to think about it, or moves you into action, without a second thought, is probably one of your passions.  Athletes, for example, crazy about their sports, pick up bats and balls and racquets; ever eager to hit the court or field to improve themselves.  Writers take pen to paper or rattle keyboards in search of perfect expression, or poetic passages.  Animal-lovers take-in wounded strays, fending for creatures unable to do it for themselves.  Activists for causes work the streets promoting better health, fairness, political outcomes and range of other missions held dear.  Passion - all of it.

Individual inspiration and passion are so closely linked as to be almost inseparable.  They form two-way streets within each of us, practically begging to be acknowledged and validated by tangible actions.  The closer you get to your inner passions, the better your ability to harness inspiration to apply to everything you do.

Inspirational Strengths

Your personal strengths naturally foster inspiration, prompting you to stay true to yourself by growing in areas where you already excel.  People who are good at math, for instance, challenge themselves with difficult equations - inspired to test their limits.  Empathetic individuals tuned-in to the plight and feelings of others are inspired to lend their ears to friends; hoping to help them when they need it most. Through trial and error, at times, we all find our strengths. And with each revelation we draw inspiration from the things we are good at; always striving to elevate our strengths.

What about Weaknesses?

On the other side of the coin, we sometimes draw inspiration from perceived weaknesses.  Call it motivation, desire to succeed, impetus or whatever captures the notion best for you; but the desire to cancel-out our weaknesses inspires us to behave in certain ways.  Individual failure, or whatever we perceive it to be, is a strong inspirational force, prompting us to redirect our efforts toward the things we want to do better.  Like the Little Engine That Could, we are ever-inspired by inner voices prompting us to turn weaknesses into strengths - especially when the odds are stacked against us.

Faith

Perhaps the strongest force within many of us; faith inspires in far-reaching ways.  Whether religious in nature, or simply driven by a personal belief that things will work out in positive ways; faith furnishes inspiration we can bank on.  Knowing we may fail or stumble, yet continuing forward just the same shows strong inspirational faith, which can be applied to almost every situation we encounter during our lives.

True inspiration takes many forms, but it stems from things we already hold inside:  Strength, passion, weakness and faith.

Author Bio:

This is a guest post by Sarah Brooks from Freepeoplesearch.org. She is a Houston based freelance writer and blogger. Questions and comments can be sent to brooks.sarah23 @ gmail.com.

Tuesday, February 25, 2014

Blog Tour: Golden Daughter {Excerpt}


About the author:

Anne Elisabeth Stengl is the author of the award-winning Tales of Goldstone Wood series, adventure fantasies told in the classic Fairy Tale style. Her books include Christy Award-winning Heartless and Veiled Rose, and Clive Staples Award-winning Starflower. She makes her home in Raleigh, North Carolina, where she lives with her husband, Rohan, a passel of cats, and one long-suffering dog. When she's not writing, she enjoys Shakespeare, opera, and tea, and practices piano, painting, and pastry baking. She studied illustration and English literature at Grace College and Campbell University.



Scene from Chapter Three:

Sairu made her way from Princess Safiya’s chambers out to the walkways of the encircling gardens. The Masayi, abode of the Golden Daughters, was an intricate complex of buildings linked by blossom-shrouded walkways, calm with fountains and clear, lotus-filled pools where herons strutted and spotted fish swam.

Here she had lived all the life she could remember.


The Masayi was but a small part of Manusbau Palace, which comprised the whole of Sairu’s existence. She had never stepped beyond the palace walls. To do so would be to step into a world of corruption, corruption to which a Golden Daughter would not be impervious until she was safely chartered to a master and her life’s work was affixed in her heart and mind. Meanwhile, she must live securely embalmed in this tomb, waiting for life to begin.

Sairu’s mouth curved gently at the corners, and she took small steps as she had been trained—slow, dainty steps that disguised the swiftness with which she could move at need. Even in private she must maintain the illusion, even here within the Masayi.

A cat sat on the doorstep of her own building, grooming itself in the sunlight. She stepped around it and proceeded into the red-hung halls of the Daughter’s quarters and on to her private chambers. There she must gather what few things she would take with her—fewer things even than Jen-ling would take on her journey to Aja. For Jen-ling would be the wife of a prince, and she must give every impression of a bride on her wedding journey.

I wonder who my master will be? Sairu thought as she slid back the rattan door to her chamber and entered the quiet simplicity within. She removed her elaborate costume and exchanged it for a robe of simple red without embellishments. She washed the serving girl cosmetics from her face and painted on the daily mask she and her sisters wore—white with black spots beneath each eye and a red stripe down her chin. It was elegant and simple, and to the common eye it made her indistinguishable from her sisters.

The curtain moved behind her. She did not startle but turned quietly to see the same cat slipping into her room. Cats abounded throughout Manusbau Palace, kept on purpose near the storehouses to manage the vermin. But they did not often enter private chambers.

Sairu, kneeling near her window with her paint pots around her, watched the cat as it moved silkily across the room, stepped onto her sleeping cushions, and began kneading the soft fabric, purring all the while. Its claws pulled at the delicate threads. But it was a cat. As far as it was concerned, it had every right to enjoy or destroy what it willed.

At last it seemed to notice Sairu watching it. It turned sleepy eyes to her and blinked.

Sairu smiled. In a voice as sweet as honey, she asked, “Who are you?”

The cat twitched its tail softly and went on purring.

The next moment, Sairu was across the room, her hand latched onto the cat’s scruff. She pushed it down into the cushions and held it there as it yowled and snarled, trying to catch at her with its claws.

“Who are you?” she demanded, her voice fierce this time. “What are you? Are you an evil spirit sent to haunt me?”

“No, dragons eat it! I mean, rrrraww! Mreeeow! Yeeeowrl!

The cat twisted and managed to lash out at her with its back feet, its claws catching in the fabric of her sleeve. One claw scratched her wrist, startling her just enough that she loosened her hold. The cat took advantage of the opportunity and, hissing like a fire demon, leapt free. It sprang across the room, knocking over several of her paint pots, and spun about, back-arched and snarling. Every hair stood on end, and its ears lay flat to its skull.

Sairu drew a dagger from her sleeve and crouched, prepared for anything. The smile lingered on her mouth, but her eyes flashed. “Who sent you?” she demanded. “Why have you come to me now? You know of my assignment, don’t you.”

Meeeeowrl,” the cat said stubbornly and showed its fangs in another hiss.

“I see it in your face,” Sairu said, moving carefully to shift her weight and prepare to spring. “You are no animal. Who is your master, devil?”

The cat dodged her spring easily enough, which surprised her. Sairu was quick and rarely missed a target. Her knife sank into the floor and stuck there, but she released it and whipped another from the opposite sleeve even as she whirled about.

Any self-respecting cat would have made for the window or the door. This one sprang back onto the cushions and crouched there, tail lashing. Its eyes were all too sentient, but it said only “Meeeeow,” as though trying to convince itself.

Sairu chewed the inside of her cheek. Then, in a voice as smooth as butter, she said, “We have ways of dealing with devils in this country. Do you know what they are, demon-cat?”

The cat’s ears came up. “Prreeowl?” it said.

“Allow me to enlighten you.”

And Sairu put her free hand to her mouth and uttered a long, piercing whistle. The household erupted with the voices of a dozen and more lion dogs.

The little beasts, slipping and sliding and crashing into walls, their claws clicking and clattering on the tiles, careened down the corridor and poured into Sairu’s room. Fluffy tails wagging, pushed-in noses twitching, they roared like the lions they believed themselves to be and fell upon the cat with rapacious joy.

The cat uttered one long wail and the next moment vanished out the window. Sairu, dogs milling at her feet, leapt up and hurried to look out after it, expecting to see a tawny tail slipping from sight. But she saw nothing.
The devil was gone. For the moment at least.

Sairu sank down on her cushions, and her lap was soon filled with wriggling, snuffling hunters eager for praise. She petted them absently, but her mind was awhirl. She had heard of devils taking the form of animals and speaking with the tongues of men. But she had never before seen it. She couldn’t honestly say she’d even believed it.

“What danger is my new master in?” she wondered. “From what must I protect him?”

Monday, February 24, 2014

Book Tour: Golden Daughter {Cover Reveal + Giveaway!}

Golden Daughter by Anne Elisabeth Stengl
A novel of Goldstone Wood



Beyond the Realm of Dreams is a World She Never Imagined

Masayi Sairu was raised to be dainty, delicate, demure . . . and deadly. She is one of the emperor’s Golden Daughters, as much a legend as she is a commodity. One day, Sairu will be contracted in marriage to a patron, whom she will secretly guard for the rest of her life.

But when she learns that a sacred Dream Walker of the temple seeks the protection of a Golden Daughter, Sairu forgoes marriage in favor of this role. Her skills are stretched to the limit, for assassins hunt in the shadows, and phantoms haunt in dreams. With only a mysterious Faerie cat and a handsome slave—possessed of his own strange abilities—to help her, can Sairu shield her new mistress from evils she can neither see nor touch?

For the Dragon is building an army of fire. And soon the heavens will burn.


From the author:

The cover illustration was done by Julia Popova. Visit her website, http://www.forestgirl.ru/, to learn more about her and her fantastic work!

If you’d like to learn more about Golden Daughter, visit the book page for interesting articles, illustrations, and more!


Illustration from the book:


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Come back tomorrow for a sneak peek at Golden Daughter!

Thursday, February 20, 2014

What Focus Means to Me


FOCUS means saying no. It means giving up the things that eat my time but no longer -- or maybe never did -- seem worth it to me. It means giving up something I'd like to do for something I'd love to do -- or, yes, something that just has to be done. It means logging off LibraryThing forever so I can spend my time on sites I like better (or even offline entirely.) It means turning down a book review offer, no matter how great the book, because I already have a stack of unread tomes on my nightstand.

FOCUS means living now. I will focus on what the pastor is saying, not on my Sunday afternoon to-do list. I will hear what my friends are saying and not formulate my response before they're halfway through a sentence. I will log off the computer before my blog post is complete to play a board game with my brothers. I will attempt to slow down and actually enjoy the novel. “In the case of good books, the point is not to see how many of them you can get through, but rather how many can get through to you.” (Mortimer J. Adler)

FOCUS means knowing my priorities. It means my devotions come before Literature homework and the research paper. It means the research paper's notes come before the next scene in my latest novel. It means said novel comes before fanfiction or my blog. It means fanfiction or my blog come before Facebook surfing. And sometimes, it means dropping everything with neither warning nor complaint to spend the weekend with my family for the few months I'm still a high school kid.

FOCUS means saying yes. Yes, I'll log off the computer to play Life with Nicholas. Yes, I'll put down the book to help Mom bake all day. Yes, I'll finish my homework tonight, even though the latest episode of my favorite television show expires from Hulu Free. Yes, I'll set aside my craft project to go on a last-minute family weekend errand run.

Basically, FOCUS means ouch. Because it will take work. It's not how I'm used to living. But when your friends barely know you and your whole family just knows you as "the girl behind the computer"...

Was that really living, anyway?

Tuesday, February 18, 2014

Beginner's Guide to Sponsored Blog Posts

I received this email from a friend the other day:


A company has approached me about sponsoring them on my blog. I've never done anything like that before, and I know you have. How do you decide if the company is right for you? And how do you not compromise your blog's integrity for money?

After I sent my response, she and I agreed it would make a great blog post. So for any other bloggers wondering, here's what I told her!

Hey there! First of all: as a minor, I have never been able to be sponsored for actual money. (I'm an adult now! Still not sponsored for money, though.) I've been sponsored with free products, books, services etc. to review/promote, but never straight money. I do, however, have a close friend who blogs and is sponsored this way regularly. So I can combine my knowledge of personal and her experience.

Personally, I don't think accepting a sponsor compromises integrity. Now, it may depend on the sponsor.

How to Decide If a Company Is Right For You: If it's a movie you wouldn't watch, a book you'd never read, a store you don't like shopping at, etc. then just say no. (I've made exception to this once, to help an indie author I was friends with who needed hosts for a blog tour. I pointed out to my readers that it wasn't my usual stuff, but she's a friend, now let's give her our attention! If you ever reach this point, you'll have to decide for yourself how far you'll go.) However, if you have no clear objections to the sponsor and have at least a little interest, I don't see any reason to say no.
Example: I was offered a blogging opportunity to promote a paranormal romance movie that was releasing a few weeks later, on Valentine's Day, I think. The swag was worth a lot of money, and it was a well-known movie. But I knew I wouldn't watch that movie, wouldn't like that movie, wouldn't approve of stuff in the movie. So I said no. On the other hand, Grammar.ly once contacted me requesting a swap - I get a special free trial of their program, and in exchange, promote their site/discuss my opinions of their service. I'm a writer, with school essays and personal fiction alike to be edited. So I gave a resounding yes.

How to Not Compromise: Part of not compromising is in the above -- not accepting sponsorship from a company you wouldn't endorse outside of payment. Ask yourself, "If I were a normal customer, not a paid influencer, would I still say/do the same things?" Your answer should be yes, or your actions and words need to change to reflect that honest opinion of the company.

Now, this is where things get tricky. I don't know how the actual sponsoring deals work outside the ones I've done. I know some authors of books I've reviewed, and possibly some small companies, have not been thrilled with my negative comments. I can be known on Amazon as a bit snarky. But I always want to be honest. Never mean -- but never dishonest. I tend to say everything I can think of on a topic; most other bloggers I follow either say one or two gently-worded things about what they didn't like, or just don't talk about stuff they don't like. I just kind of... blurt. I'm working on that.

What This Means: If you don't like something about a book/website/movie/product/service/company, then either say you don't like it or don't mention that bit at all. I do the former, most people do the latter. Entirely up to you. If you do like something, then say so! If we're talking reviews, a sponsored review should be no different from a regular review (except for the disclaimer, which we'll get to in a sec.) If we're talking posts in general -- like where you write about one thing, and tie in a related sponsor -- then, well, by this point you know you like the company and approve of them. So it shouldn't feel wrong, dishonest, or compromising at all to praise and promote that company.

Disclaimer: By law, you have to put a disclaimer stating that a review or post was sponsored. From a book reviewing program that taught me this:

"Q: Why do I need to post a disclaimer that I received the book for free in exchange for a review?
A: As of December 1, 2009, new FTC Guidelines state that bloggers receiving any kind of compensation should disclose that information on their blog when posting a review of the product. As you are responsible for complying with the FTC Guidelines, we recommend that you review them, available at http://www.access.gpo.gov/nara/cfr/waisidx03/16cfr25503.html."

An example of my usual disclaimer: "I received a [free copy of this book/free trial of this website/insert product or service here] through [company/publisher] in exchange for [an honest review/a promotional post/whatever you promised them]. All opinions expressed are entirely my own."

Thursday, February 13, 2014

Book Review: The Scarlet Letter

The Scarlet Letter by Nathaniel Hawthorne

Free Kindle version
Amazon Page for the version I read

This review was originally written as a school report, so it will differ in style to my other reviews.

The Scarlet Letter by Nathaniel Hawthorne discloses the tale of a woman, living in an early American Puritan settlement, whose pregnancy reveals her sin of adultery, but who refuses to share the name of her partner in sin. Opening with Hester's walk of shame from prison to the punishment scaffold, readers then follow both Hester and other villagers important to her tale through seven years of humiliation, remorse, fame, and infamy.

Hester Prynne is made to walk, with her infant child, through the streets of her town and stand for several hours on the scaffold, as punishment for her sin. The titular punishment given is that of the scarlet letter A on the breast of her gown, worn at all times. Upon the scaffold, before all the townspeople, the young minister Dimmesdale urges Hester to make known the father of her child, that he may accept his punishment and therefore begin his path back to mercy and forgiveness.  Hester stoutly refuses and stands firm before her punishment.


(The following is whited out to prevent spoilers. If you want to read my in-depth exposition of the plot, highlight the text and read on. If you want to avoid spoilers, skip past this whited-out portion.)

After her stand on the scaffold, Hester and her infant return to the prison. An elderly physician, Roger Chillingworth, has just arrived in town; he visits Hester and her child. Through their private conversation, Chillingworth is revealed to be Hester's husband. Their plan was for him to follow Hester to New England, but when years passed without news of him, the town presumed him lost at sea. Chillingworth presses Hester into a promise to conceal his true relation to her, as she has concealed that of her adulterous partner. He vows to discover who this man is for himself, and work his own personal revenge.

A little cottage stands at the outskirts of the town, partly hidden from view.  It is there that Hester and her daughter, Pearl, begin their new lives under the shadow of the scarlet letter. Despite the townspeople's cruelty and shamefulness towards her, Hester becomes a vital member of the community. She is known throughout the settlement as the woman most skilled at needlework; this becomes her daily career. Births, deaths, public ceremonies, minister's clothing, and military uniforms all require Hester's handiwork. Only the pure wedding-garments for the town are without her needle's touch.

Little Pearl, as she begins to develop from infant to child, displays a wild and passionate nature. Her reckless, untrainable heart and beautiful but mischievous features, combined with her intricant, lavish attire, bring the townspeople to believe either that Pearl embodies the sin of passion that gave her being, or that she is of the Devil. Townspeople begin to wonder if it be best that Pearl be removed from under Hester's care, and given into more suitable upbringing. Such thoughts are made known to Hester by the former governor when she brings a pair of gloves to his home, where she discovers Chillingworth, Minister Dimmesdale, an elderly minister, and the governor discussing her child's fate.

The elderly minister attempts to test Pearl's knowledge of spiritual matters, but Pearl's flighty nature brings her to tell tales rather than answer truthfully. The governor concludes that this settles the matter, and Pearl must be taken. Hester cannot live on without her little Pearl, and pleads with the governor. As he will not sway, she turns to Minister Dimmesdale for aid. With passion and a trembling hand over his heart, the minister makes Hester's case plain, and convinces the other gentlemen that it is indeed best that child and mother not be separated. Pearl caresses the minister's hand before she and her mother return home.

Minister Dimmesdale is weak and frail physically, a fact visible to all. The townspeople adore their pastor and agree of the great joy in Roger Chillingworth living with the minister. Chillingworth is determined to worm out the secret which the minister buries within his heart, that the people are unaware of but which Chillingworth has seen hints of in the minister's speech and manner. The physician thus pours all his energy into this task, while the minister is left unaware of his close friend's ulterior motives. One night, however, Chillingworth bares the sleeping minister's chest to reveal something which gives Chillingworth a devilish delight.

The minister's secret eats at his conscience. Despite his many secret penances, he cannot be rid of guilt. In an attempt to shake his agony, Dimmesdale goes out at night to the public punishment scaffold. The elderly minister passes by without noticing. Hester and Pearl then begin to pass by; Dimmesdale calls them up to the scaffold with him. The three of them stand hand in hand. Pearl asks the minister to stand with them thus at noon, but twice he refuses. Just as he tells her daylight will not see the three of them standing together, a meteor lights up the sky, and the letter A in red crosses the heavens. At this moment, the minister becomes aware of Chillingworth, standing before the scaffold and watching the trio there.

Chillingworth, playing the friendly physician as ever, takes Dimmesdale back home with talk of sleepwalking. Hester and Pearl return home, as well. Later, Hester meets with Chillingworth in a garden. They speak openly of Dimmesdale's agony; Hester declares that, no matter what Chillingworth threatens to do in return, she will reveal his true identity to the minister. She and Pearl then return home, with Pearl interrogating her mother on the meaning of the scarlet letter and why the minister covers his heart with his hand.

Dimmesdale visits John Eliot and, upon his return through the forest, meets with Hester. She explains Chillingworth is her husband. They have a moment of peace and happiness together, and make plans to leave the settlement to build a new life back in England. The minister returns to town a changed man. Three days later, a great ceremony with a processional and Election Sermon celebrates the inauguration of the newly elected governor. The minister, as well as other church figures and military men, march through the town. Dimmesdale gives a passionate sermon as always. Upon the procession away from the church, however, Dimmesdale grows weaker and weaker; it becomes clear that he is dying.

The minister stops by the scaffold, beside which Hester and Pearl stand watching the parade. Disregarding Chillingworth's reprimands, he calls woman and child to him, and they help him climb up to the scaffold with them. There, with loving Hester and Pearl, and hateful Chillingworth beside him, he cries out to all the crowd his secret. He tears off his ministerial shirt to reveal what many later claimed was a scarlet letter A on his chest. He collapses, and after begging the forgiveness and love of Pearl and Hester, passes on into death.

Less then a year later, Chillingworth dies as well. Hester and Pearl leave the settlement. Years later, Hester returns alone to the cottage, still bearing the scarlet letter on her breast. She becomes a counselor and friend to many of the townspeople, who rather look up to her by this time. The many wealthy articles that come to Hester's cottage, and the fancifully stitched baby garments that she sends away, suggest that Pearl is happily married and mother of her own sweet child at home in England. Eventually two graves, separate but sharing a tombstone, lay in the settlement graveyard, with the epigraph that speaks of the letter A in red.

On the surface, this story appears to be a cautionary Puritan tale of the evils of sin. It deals specifically with sins of passion - both the passion of adultery, and that of hatred and vengeance. However, the nearly satirical or critical tone often found in passages speaking of Puritan tradition carries a more subtle lesson against pride and hypocrisy. Hawthorne seems to to be pointing out, as the Puritans had forgotten, that all sins are equally grave in God's sight. The Lord cares little for laws, such as the town leaders upheld, or outward appearances of righteousness, such as defined the minister Dimmesdale's life. Rather, He values the condition of a man's heart. As Dimmesdale's life and words taught, truth is above all else.


Flowery language and symbolism, as was typical of the time, can be found at nearly any point in this novel. However, the plot is not dry, abrupt, or disappointing, as can sometimes be true of the fiction of that time. The Scarlet Letter is not a happy tale tied off with a bow such as modern readers enjoy; neither does it focus entirely on moral lessons or harsh reality. Instead, Hawthorne strikes a balance between skilled storytelling and moral application, making his lessons all the more powerful as the readers can appreciate the medium through which they are taught.

Tuesday, February 11, 2014

The Inevitable Post for an Annual Day of Hideously Pink Cards and Chalk-like Candy {Giveaway!}

I'm back, my lovely readers! And just in time for Valentine's Day. I already did the whole blogger-waxes-philosophical-on-consumerism bit last year. So, today, I'm going to just share a conglomeration of things I'm loving this Valentine's Day. Have fun with it, and don't forget to enter the giveaway at the end! :)

P.S. All movie clips are likely to contain spoilers. Watch at your own risk!

P.P.S. I make no promises about the photos or art, either. Basically this entire post is probably spoilers.

P.P.P.S. All videos stolen from YouTube and all images from Pinterest. Nothing here is mine.












How can you not love that?!






On a side note: why do all the great classic romances have two proposal scenes?




Is it bad that I ship both of these? Personally I think Molly's the more likely option, but the bridesmaid is more suited to Sherlock's personality.


That photo actually inspired a scene in Sixteen.


I cannot wait for this movie.

Saturday, January 18, 2014

Sixteen Blog Tour Kick-Off + Giveaway!


Sixteen days. Sixteen stops. One giveaway.

Let the fun begin!


Nicole "Nikki" Johnson has never gotten along with her mother, so when she meets a great new guy, it's no surprise that Matt's age is all her mom sees. Just because he's twenty-four and she's sixteen doesn't mean he's a creeper! Thankfully, Nikki's dad allows Nikki and Matt to be together and see how things work out. Their relationship is fantastic and Nikki is on cloud nine...

Until the Fourth of July picnic, when things go too far. Now a very changed Nikki has to make choices that will affect her every relationship - with Matt, her parents, her best friend, and most importantly, God.


Or, if you have a different ereader device... buy the book on Smashwords! https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/398239

But wait!
Before we get to the tour schedule, I have an announcement to make...
Sixteen will be available in paperback!
That's right, you heard me. After all that talk of ebook-only, I was convinced by readers and writer-friends alike to go paperback. So on March 29 -- an important date in the book -- Sixteen will release on Amazon in paperback. Woot woot! Now back to today's festivities.

Zara Hoffman - Why I Chose Self-Publishing - January 19
Covers and Ink - The Story Behind Sixteen - January 20
Literary and Lace - Interview - January 21
Iola's Christian Reads - Sixteen Facts About Sixteen - January 22
 Writings of Rosie- The Theme of Sixteen - January 23
Tales of Goldstone Wood - Interview - January 24
Blooming With Books - Name Meanings - January 25
Na's Not So Newsworthy Thoughts - Excerpt - January 26
Musings of a Creative Mind - It Takes a Village - January 27
The Ramblings of a Young Author - Finding Me in Sixteen - January 28
United in His Love - Interview - January 29
Author Mariella Hunt - Mother-daughter quotes - January 30
Realm of Hearts - Interview - January 31
Zerina Blossom - Dream Casting - February 1
Appasionata - Playlist - February 2
Summer Snowflakes - Interview - February 3

And just for fun... I wanted to find the actual scene, but I don't like the new, live version of Rolf, and this was all I could find from the 1963 movie.



Giveaway!

Monday, January 13, 2014

Keep Moving Forward

Today, it's just me, lovely readers. I'd like to discuss several upcoming changes in 2014. I couldn't for the life of me come up with a unique title, so I figured movie quotes are always a safe bet! (To those of you wondering, it's the tag line from Meet the Robinsons.)

My shiny new Facebook cover banner!

First order of business: Sixteen's big day is rapidly approaching! Woohoo! I can't wait to get this book out into the world. I know most books undergo severe change before release to the world, but honestly, it feels like this final version of Sixteen isn't even the same book I still have saved from first-draft-days. Even beta readers will be surprised to find no less than three whole new scenes. I love this book-baby of mine, and I can't wait to introduce you all!


Second matter to discuss: To celebrate my debut, sixteen wonderful blogger-friends will be hosting me on a tour! I've hosted plenty of tours, interviews, and guest posts. This will be my first time in the spotlight. To be honest, it's a bizarre feeling. But the tour shall be grand! And glorious! And include one mega giveaway right here! Details to come :) Other than the kick-off and giveaway, there will be no posts here on my blog during the tour - instead, come with me to check out my lovely writer-friends' homes in cyberspace.

Third: I will be a proper adult in two days. Excuse me while I hyperventilate.

Yes. I really did just use my first GIF. The Notebook Sisters are rubbing off on me.

Fourth: Because we're wrapping up our third annual blog party this week, and because I really want to enjoy my big adult birthday, and because I have a mega first-time tour coming up on Saturday, there will be no more posts between this and the tour kick-off. Sorry to disappoint anyone hoping for the two more expected posts. I'm a human being who's already behind in blog matters. I need time for tour/book prep. And, of course, sleep. Sleep's important.

Last but not least and quite lugubrious: This blog party was the least organized and most hectic yet. Without boring you with all the details, I'm sad to say, this will be our final annual blog party. I hope to continue participating in tours for future books, and of course we'll have guest posts, interviews, and giveaways at other times. But I'd like to have my blogging fun a bit more spread out, and have time to focus (my 2014 word) on other things - such as work, my books, school studies, and other non-cyber demands.

So until tour kick-off, bye guys!


This might become a thing... seriously, GIFS are awesome. What took me so long?
P.S. This girl is totally Nikki. No joke. I feel like I'm staring at a ghost.